Five hundred and fifteen super Shura field (finale + new book)
The latest website: One day, Lanai Island.
Luo Baowen, Zhang Xiaolei, Ford Ingrid, Jennifer Lawrence and others are having fun with 12 children, Mr. and Mrs. Musk, Mr. and Mrs. Mark Zucker, the three founders of Twitter, the two founders of uber...whastapp The company's founder and his wife also came with 30 children, and five Asian women also came with 10 children.
Wang Guanxi's phone rang, saying that Lin Xiaoyu and Shu Jinghan had an appointment to meet in Hong Kong.
Lin Xiaoyu has been in Lu City, while Shu Jinghan is in the United Kingdom, where she revealed her life experience, returned to the Virgin family, became the heir to the Virgin Consortium, the future British Countess, and changed her name to Luo E. Virgin.
When Wang Guanxi arrived in Hong Kong, Lin Xiaoyu took two children, Lin Tong and Lin Xi.
Shu Jinghan also held two children, Caesar Virgin and Diana Virgin.
Both of their children are twins.
The two met once 13 years ago, when they were still in high school, and now 13 years have passed, and this is the second time the two have met.
Neither of them thought that this guy, Wang Guanxi, would actually lie to them for thirteen years.
No wonder Wang Guanxi didn't get a certificate or hold a wedding when he married them. They thought they were Wang Guanxi's only love, but they didn't expect to be deceived for 13 years, and their children were 9 years old.
The two didn't move or speak, and the children fought first.
You are the book, lose Jinghan?
Shu Jinghan that fool is dead, my name is Roy Virgin
At this time, the children fought and cried, so they persuaded them to fight.
Lin Xiaoyu found that Diana Virgin looked like her when she was a child, with a double ponytail, while Shu Jinghan found that Lin Tong looked like her when she was a child, with a single ponytail.
Is it?
Is it? ? ?
Could it be that the child you have raised for 9 years is not your own?
Did you raise a child for your rival for 9 years?
Lin Xiaoyu was the same as Shu Jinghan who was instantly smashed down to eighteen levels of hell by a thunderbolt.
Dizzy glances at each other, suddenly collapsed and fainted.
...
It's finally over.
The new book has been prepared, the subject matter has been thought out, and the time is to start in 2020. Write a good article all the way and always.
And this book, the rhythm is not good, the emotional drama is not cool, writing a bunch of useless venture capital, the overall cool point is not enough, the sense of expectation is not enough, making money is easy to get aesthetic fatigue.
The results of this book were very high, and no one read it afterward.
The next book is specifically for people who like to pretend, spend extravagantly, and change girlfriends along the way. Each girlfriend should be replaced within a week. It is like changing clothes and eating a delicious meal. It is written for the audience of male readers.
Make the most of the coolness.
Write all the way to make money, spend extravagantly, keep squandering, don't talk about feelings, pretend all the way... All the plots serve the protagonist's cool.
The protagonist vulgar.
male.
hobby, female.
It is to decompress, cool, and serve readers.
The new book will be written specifically for the audience readers, and write the extreme sense of refreshment that the audience readers need.
This book is a bit, how should I put it, the protagonist is too low-key, making money and not spending extravagantly, the emotional drama affects the main plot, and the rhythm is slow.
There is nothing cool about the emotional scene. It affects the development of the main line in the early stage, and it is meaningless to write in the later stage. Even the kiss scene is omitted.
The plot of investment and acquisition is boring.
The new book involves the plot of acquiring a company, and I will cover it in a few sentences.
For the new book, I want each chapter to have a sense of refreshment or anticipation...or a foreshadowing.
Emotional scenes are for women, so don't write about men. If male readers read Shuangwen, talk about love and attraction.
The new book accepts women all the way, and changes girlfriends all the way to various types of girls. I don’t want girlfriends, and I don’t want to flirt with girls. Just smash the bank card and go there, and I don’t want a heroine.
Let the protagonist have fun in time, be drunk at the moment, indulge in uninhibited life, not talk about love, not be bound by any girl, pluck birds ruthlessly. It's all the way to go, no girlfriend.
Only write for the cool points that the male readers of the audience need.
Because the big environment is now harem writing, there are very few female writings, especially harem writing needs superb portrayal of characters, basically they are not well written, and the writing affects the plot and the main line.
It's not that male readers don't like to watch it, but the emotional drama affects the rhythm, the plot, and the main line is procrastinated and not cool enough.
There are too many female supporting roles, and the plot is procrastinating. The new book has three ambiguous chapters or three chapters, and five chapters are replaced with new female supporting roles. Of course, the female supporting roles cannot be repeated. I will go to the female channel to watch some female supporting characters for a while.
I write it specifically for male readers who like to accept women, pretend to be coercive, make money, spend extravagantly, throw money at it, and have fun all the way.
The new book will be released within 1 to 2 months, with a period of rest.
The beginning has already been written, but I will think about how to write it later. The next book will not follow Wang Guanxi's character design. Just play with pure love, just pull up your trousers belt, grab your bank card, and you're done. Five Chapters can be replaced by a female supporting role, and at most ten chapters can be replaced by the next one
The title of the new book has been selected, and the internal submission has also passed. Write 100,000 to 200,000 words and publish it.
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